I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi Levi. It was cool learning about grenades and bombs. I did not know there were so many different types of bombs and grenades. I like how you added descriptions of how they were/ are used. Libby.
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Hi Levi.
ReplyDeleteIt was cool learning about grenades and bombs.
I did not know there were so many different types of bombs and grenades.
I like how you added descriptions of how they were/ are used.
Libby.
This is really interesting Levi, what was this task for.
ReplyDeleteShut up levi
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