I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi Levi My name is Jennah and I go to New Brighton Catholic school. Your blog was really cool and it looks really colourful, when you put the picture of Sonic Dash I guessed that you enjoy playing Sonic Dash. I have played Sonic Dash before it was pretty fun. Maybe next time you could add writing to your work because it is kind of hard to tell what each picture is about but otherwise it was great. From your post I managed to work out that you are nine. I also liked how you like camping just like me have you ever been camping in Kaikoura? I own a section in Greymouth my family and a family friend came camping with us there in the start of the year, we had so much fun. I was just wondering is that a picture of a painting or is it something else?
Hi Levi my Name is Norman and I'm from Room 23 at Owairaka school and I really like your blog post about what you like to do and whats your favourite game and you should check my blog. Blog you later.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something I have done well. Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Hello Levi.
ReplyDeleteI see you like to play cool games I like to play games too. :)
I like the way you added a gif.
Maybe you could put how old you are now?
OK Andrew thanks for liking my GIF.
ReplyDeleteHi Levi My name is Jennah and I go to New Brighton Catholic school.
ReplyDeleteYour blog was really cool and it looks really colourful, when you put the picture of Sonic Dash I guessed that you enjoy playing Sonic Dash.
I have played Sonic Dash before it was pretty fun.
Maybe next time you could add writing to your work because it is kind of hard to tell what each picture is about but otherwise it was great.
From your post I managed to work out that you are nine.
I also liked how you like camping just like me have you ever been camping in Kaikoura?
I own a section in Greymouth my family and a family friend came camping with us there in the start of the year, we had so much fun.
I was just wondering is that a picture of a painting or is it something else?
Hi Levi my Name is Norman and I'm from Room 23 at Owairaka school and I really like your blog post about what you like to do and whats your favourite game and you should check my blog. Blog you later.
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