I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
KIA ORA Levi, My name is Asfan and I am from Owairaka Primary School I like your Scratch game and how you did the creation with the guy falling down and down. But you can also add sky in it or he is dropping with a parachute. What is your unlikely planet in outer solar system. Thanks for sharing your learning. Blog you later, Asfan.
Kia ora my name is Chris I'm from Room 23 at Owairaka District School. I really like your blog post about your scratch game and its monkey and he is really funny and how can you do all of your scratch?
Kia ora levi, my name is Shivish and I'm from Owaairaka School. I like your game you made in Scrach. I suggest that maybe you can add some trees to it. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Blog you later.
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KIA ORA Levi, My name is Asfan and I am from Owairaka Primary School I like your Scratch game and how you did the creation with the guy falling down and down. But you can also add sky in it or he is dropping with a parachute.
ReplyDeleteWhat is your unlikely planet in outer solar system. Thanks for sharing your learning.
Blog you later,
Asfan.
Kia ora my name is Chris I'm from Room 23 at Owairaka District School. I really like your blog post about your scratch game and its monkey and he is really funny and how can you do all of your scratch?
ReplyDeleteblog you later.
Kia ora levi, my name is Shivish and I'm from Owaairaka School. I like your game you made in Scrach. I suggest that maybe you can add some trees to it. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Blog you later.
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